#2 is NOT a good Cover Letter
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This is NOT a good Cover Letter because:
►There are indents for paragraphs. This should be a
►There is not a double space between paragraphs.
►The A and E in Assistant Editor in the first paragraph is not capped
►The sentence in paragraph 1 that states "I am now
seeking the position of assistant editor that I read about one
needs the word "one" changed to "on." Spelling error.
►The contact below the date is lacking a person's name
►The salutation should be to a
person not to a magazine.
►The 3rd paragraph is two
sentences and says very little. There is also a spelling error in
the last sentence of this paragraph-scne should be scene.
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