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Cover Letter #2 is a bad Cover Letter

-Congratulations you have gotten #2 correct.


This is a bad Cover Letter because:
►There are indents for paragraphs.  This should be a block format.
►There is not a double space between paragraphs.
►The A and E in Assistant Editor in the first paragraph is not capped
►The sentence in paragraph 1 that states "I am now seeking the position of assistant editor that I read about one www.journalismjobs.com" needs the word "one" changed to "on."  Spelling error.
►The contact below the date is lacking a person's name and address.
►The salutation should be to a person not to a magazine.
►The 3rd paragraph is two sentences and says very little.  There is also a spelling error in the last sentence of this paragraph-scne should be scene.

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